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These aren't too bad but there are a few problems I'll point out for you.
I'm sure you referenced from memory what the Keronjin look like. And it's not too hard to draw them. However, there are some things that need fixing such as the eyes, legs, and hands.
Based on the show, the eyes are larger than the ones in this picture. I'd say the width of the eyes are 2/5 the width of the head. Try that and see how it works.
The legs look uneven. The third and last ones have pretty even legs and maybe you should try a copy/paste to keep the legs even with each other on other models. But in some cases, you'll have dynamic poses, where the legs look different. In that case, you have to try to keep them the same length and width.
The hands are really odd for Keronjin. They're usually nubs with little bumps for finger until there's a dramatic close up showing they have fingers. This doesn't have that dramatic look, so leaving the arms as nubs are fine.
That's all I got. For the most part, it's really nicely done. The only problems here were just anatomy problems and very few. I hope what I had helps. C:
First of all, they're so cute!
There's really not much not-to-like here, so I guess the only negative critique I could offer is that each one is very simply drawn, but I know that's a pretty common thing with this kind of character.
For the stars, I gave you 4 for originality because yes they are your original characters, but they're originally from an anime/manga, so you lost a star there.
Other than that, though, I really like what you've done here! They're really cute and adorable
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