After lots of work here it is! I feel I really improved on observational fabric folds (Although it was hard as I was looking at my own clothes that I was wearing) and shading ^.^
I liked how I made the lines smoother, does it look better that way at the intersections?
The hardest part of this was the lips and nose. Took me hours xD Hands and feet are purposely not drawn realistically, just to give it a different look. I liked how it came out too. May try more in that style.
Done in MS Paint, Transparency done in GIMP.