DIALOGUE. OH THE DIALOGUE. If I had a nickel for every time I said 'Said, Replied, Screamed, Ordered, or Asked' I'd be like Bill Gates. Except Female. And not as smart.
It was hard keeping the story moving and using Zeroro's POV. Usually when he's in Trauma Switch he doesn't pay attention to his surroundings. Ugh, now it's all out of character. I'm a failure
Also, you know how I said Kururu would cameo? Well I loved the idea so much, that I threw Tamama, Tororo, Shivava and Doruru in there as well! But I had to make Garuru leave for that to happen. Bye, Garuru, I'm sorry it's not you its me. I'm just too evil and you're too nice.
I said three parts, but I'm loving this story so much I'm extending it. I wanted a lot more than I planned. I'm changing a lot of what I thought would happen and squeezing a lot more into the middle. I planned to end this chapter with Giroro and Zeroro alone, but you should look forward to Chapter Five for that... I'm anticipating seven or eitght chapters... with a little extra romance story *winkwink*
So summary: Rivals! Rivals EVERYWHERE! Regular rivals, Love Rivals, Coworker rivals.
I'm not saying it was aliens, but it was aliens.
Bad summary is bad. They see me failing, they hating.
But as I said, it keeps getting more interesting... Don't worry, there will be more ROMANCE once we're done with the DRAMA.
Part 1 Is Here --> [link]
Part 2 is Here --> [link]